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Writing, reading and maths are the three recognized traditional subjects. Computer skill should also be the fourth largest branch. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Writing and reading are the heart and brain of every human's
life
, without that no one can live longer with full functional abilities. Writing, reading and
maths
 all very important
skills
 to survive in the
world
, but as ,currently the
world
 is opening its hand towards technology
computer
 learning is
also
 become essential. Expressing common opinion of people on
this
 topic, it is likely to say that writing and reading hold the top priority position whereas
maths
 and
computer
 hold a secondary position. Leaving a
life
 as a human in
this
world
 requires communication on a day-to-day basis and communication itself is a cocktail of essential
skills
 like writing, reading, speaking and listening.
Furthermore
 speaking and listening will be learned automatically with time in
life
, but writing and reading are
skills
 that require and practice to have a good hand on it. Every person living in the universe has only become successful in their occupation if they have these basic
skills
. Furthur expressing the belief mathematics is essential but only the basic
maths
 which we learn while in school. Integration, differentiation, serious solution are a few of the difficult concepts which are very rare use in future and are not necessarily important to learn to handle an occupation related to the corporate
world
however
 if anyone has a dream to become a scientist
then
this
 skill becomes important.
Moreover
,
computer
skills
 have vital importance in every person's
life
 whether he is doing a corporate job or want to become a scientist. In conclusion, writing and reading become the most valuable asset in every person's
life
 and
maths
 along with
computer
 has succeeding rank. Not everyone needs to have a great hand in
maths
 and
computer
 they can learn these
skills
 as per the requirement.
Submitted by Dhrumil Vaghela on

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