Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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that is

it advantageous of

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of large market players which is causing outrest for the local business owners. Notwithstanding some merits in the former view. My opinion is that it is not beneficial for the consumers in

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run. Explicated below are my perspectives on both the views and the basis for my belief. On the one hand, the contention that globalization in

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sector may have perceptible benefits of competitive prices, better quality and services.

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, it lacks the conviction that with

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transformation whole market dynamics will be transferred to few top players and it will eventually create

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in any particular sector. To substantiate these, I would illustrate a recently published report by the department of small and medium scale industries which highlight monopoly as the prime reason for the decrease in

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of new businesses in

last

five years.

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I believe that to have a fair business platform there should be a restriction on the level of involvement of

such

companies.

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, the counterview has apparent benefits of local development and

also

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in the urban areas. The case in point is shop owners and other low scale businesses will be worst hit with

such

inclination and transformation.

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, I am of the opinion that

such

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dynamics

should be closely monitored by the administrative bodies for the benefit of all. In conclusion, having elucidated both the views, and anecdotal evidence presented in support of my assertions. I would like to recommend that

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globalization and foreign direct investment should have a ceiling value and

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be restricted in certain industries for the benefit of public and local industries.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

Displacement
Economies of scale
Local economies
Standardization
Cultural homogenization
Personalized service
Innovation
Community investments
Environmental impact
Competitive prices
Tax contributions
Job losses
Cultural diversity
Local employment opportunities

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