Today more and more people are using mobile phone and computer. Thus, the communication ability is losing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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every individual on
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planet has access to electronic gadgets,all thanks to advancement in science and technology. I reckon that use of mobile phone and computer has bought the world closer and has advanced the
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ability
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I disagree with the view that today more and more people are using these
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devices are leading to
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in
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ability.
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Human beings
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social animals and verbal
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is an important way of expressing their feelings and views.These electronic gadgets have made
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seamless, one can connect with people around the world without
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and is just a call or click away. Written communications can
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be done instantly with the support of these inventions. Today physical letters have been replaced by Emails.
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no transportation of letters is required and the
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reaches the recipient instantly within minutes to any part of the world.
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one can talk face to face with clients , friends and family without
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to visiting them in person.
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been possible with the help of these smart devices only . To conclude, I will reiterate that mobile and computers have rather spiked the ability to communicate
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Global connections
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Communication skills
  • Digital divide
  • Social networks
  • Virtual communication
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Cognitive empathy
  • Digital literacy
  • Social isolation
  • Cyber communication
  • Non-verbal cues
  • Screen time
  • Digital detox
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