Today more and more people are using mobile phone and computer. Thus, the communication ability is losing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Now-a-days

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every individual on

this

planet has access to electronic gadgets,all thanks to advancement in science and technology. I reckon that use of mobile phone and computer has bought the world closer and has advanced the

communication

ability

thus

I disagree with the view that today more and more people are using these

communication

devices are leading to

loss

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communication

ability.

Humanbeing

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Human beings

Human being

are

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social animals and verbal

communication

is an important way of expressing their feelings and views.These electronic gadgets have made

communication

seamless, one can connect with people around the world without

traveling

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and is just a call or click away. Written communications can

also

be done instantly with the support of these inventions. Today physical letters have been replaced by Emails.

Thus

no transportation of letters is required and the

communication

reaches the recipient instantly within minutes to any part of the world.

Furthermore

one can talk face to face with clients , friends and family without

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to visiting them in person.

This

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has

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been possible with the help of these smart devices only . To conclude, I will reiterate that mobile and computers have rather spiked the ability to communicate

amoung

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among

homosapiens.

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Technological advancements
Global connections
Face-to-face interaction
Communication skills
Digital divide
Social networks
Virtual communication
Interpersonal skills
Cognitive empathy
Digital literacy
Social isolation
Cyber communication
Non-verbal cues
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