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Nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. is this a positive or negative development?

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Almost all schools have canteens, cafeterias, or vending machines for
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. Educational institutes make a good amount of money by selling junk
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; children get easily attracted to fast
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. In my view,
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 negatively affects the
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 of
students
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 and their savings. Providing fast
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 to
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 can lead to various diseases,
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 is simply because
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 foods are not healthy for
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 but the presence of
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food
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 increases the urge in
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 to eat.
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, obesity and diabetes result from unhealthy and wrong eating patterns. The main reason is that these foods have more calories and have excess oil in them.
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, selling unhealthy
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 and soda drinks can negatively affect student’s
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 in long term.
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 to well-being issues,
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 development can financially affect
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 and their parents. The main reason behind
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 is that
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 tend to eat more at schools rather than eating homemade
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,
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, they will spend money in canteens on regular basis.
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, the variety of
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 at canteens attracts
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 towards them.
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, selling
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 can be profitable for the institute but is fruitless for
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. To conclude, despite the cafe or canteen are an essential source of income for the schools but the quality or type of
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 can affects
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health
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 and money. With firm changes in menu or by making it more healthy, it can be beneficial towards
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health
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 and for the institute.
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