Some business find that their new employees lack in basic interpersonal skills such as the lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions? Also provide relevant examples from your experience.

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The multi-national companies recruit new graduates every year from either campus recruitment or pool recruitment. They have many recruitment phases to filter out

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, but,

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companies may recruit

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potential candidate who has a lack of ability to

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with companions as a team. Every graduate enters the corporate world as soon as its graduation completes. College life to entry in the organisation is a very long shot, but teenagers do not have much time to prepare themselves for

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a scenario. In university

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always enjoy their studies without any fear of deadlines and Boss.

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they never feel to gain their potential in interpersonal

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, they just go, study, enjoy and come back home,

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cycle

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as their routine.

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is why new joiners lack basic interpersonal

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as the lack of ability to

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with colleagues as a team. An effective strategy to solve

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problem will be,

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the program can be initiated in the graduate institute in which persons who are working in an organisation and have very good command over their

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can come and deliver their experiences and tips to enhance

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organisational working

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a weekly or monthly visit can be arranged in one of the corporate sectors to have a feel of its working culture ,

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who are rigorously interested in developing these

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can join an internship. In conclusion, Universities has to take initiative and help

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to gain expertise in interpersonal

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by the ways mentioned in the preceding paragraph.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

interpersonal skills
teamwork
collaborative skills
work-ready capabilities
practical skills
digital communication
peer interaction
mentoring
onboarding process
integration
isolation
curriculum development
internships
real-world experience
individual performance
group projects
company culture

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Some business find that their new employees lack in basic interpersonal skills such as the lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions? Also provide relevant examples from your experience.

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The government should control the internet to reduce cybercrime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

Students should pay full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

space exploration is too expensive and money should be spent on more important things. to what extend do you agree or disagree

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as Important to a child’ development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?