Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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accommodation

of the Internet has been a driving force to the over-reliant on virtual sources of students. In my view, I totally agree with the fact that we should restrict the

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for education

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because

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trend has many negative consequences that might undermine the quality of study in schools.

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the Internet offers a lot of sources to

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as references for essays, some pupils take

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for granted and plagiarise other people's work.

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of

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referring

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citing a text, these learners fully copy and paste from the research journals, with the

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that there are plenty of presented papers so it is impossible to

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the original source of a piece of information.

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action is regarded as 

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illegal

, yet there are many of the students

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performed and get away with it.

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universities

should limit Internet

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for research and writing activities to avoid

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misbehaviors

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.

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schoolchildren

can be overly dependent on the web-based math solvers for their homework. In fact, there are many websites that can give

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to a math problem with explained steps. The tools should be of

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for those who are keen on

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understanding of the exercise, but a lot of learners only attempt to get the correct answers and neglect the background calculation. Eventually, they might not retain any knowledge, which diminishes the efficiency of the teaching practice.

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, a constraint on online usage is needed for academic institutions to maximize the learning capacity. In conclusion, schools and universities should put control on the

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of online materials in learning activities. In order to effectively

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these sources of data, students should be more ethical to prevent the violation of school rules and learn with

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attitude.