The housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
These days as the population is increasing at an unprecedented pace, the housing shortage has become one of the main consequences. It is concerned whether it is an obligation of the
government
to alleviate Use synonyms
this
issue or whether the nation is responsible for the lack of accommodation. I firmly believe that both parties should integrate and contribute to the solutions.
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To begin
with, there is ample evidence that sustainable housing is strongly Linking Words
due to
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government
regulations. Use synonyms
That is
to say, political Linking Words
houses
should establish certain restrictions on the Use synonyms
numbers
of people and land Fix the agreement mistake
number
that is
distributed to each citizen. Linking Words
For instance
, a recent survey has revealed that 25 countries had a scarcity of land to construct new Linking Words
houses
because of the fact that Use synonyms
government
didn't allocate the land properly and residents were prone to build large Use synonyms
houses
in order to outperform one another, which later caused housing shortages in multifold metropolitan cities.
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Secondly
, it is explicit that because of the nation's unprofitable purchase of lands and housing facilities, it has become prevalent Linking Words
to
some citizens to inevitably live in flats and accommodations. It can be solved by public organisations that can share and divide some Change preposition
for
houses
, which indicates that the Use synonyms
government
is not fully liable for Use synonyms
such
an issue. Linking Words
For example
, several cities concluded that Linking Words
this
problem is partly Linking Words
due to
people's actions, 45 per cent of which could solve Linking Words
this
problem by uniting both the Linking Words
government
and the nation.
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To conclude
, it can be clearly seen that I strongly advocate that it is not only feasible for the Linking Words
government
to come up with a solution, but Use synonyms
also
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citizens
of the city Change preposition
for citizens
are
able to resolve the scarcity of housing.Change the verb form
to be
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