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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#communications #it’s #letters
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In
this
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 modern world, we can see huge technological advancements in
fields
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 of
communication
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. Before the invention of
telephone
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,
letters
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 were the only
way
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 to communicate with
people
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 living in distance. But today, they have been
eveolved
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evolved
 to emails, mobiles, land phones etc, which are used as means of
communication
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.
This
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 essay will argue with my
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viewpoint
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 on why
letters
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 are always a special
way
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 despite
invention
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the invention
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 of various methods of
communication
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. Nowadays, Most
of
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the
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people
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 live a very busy life. They always look for the simplest and easiest
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 to do
a work
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work
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.
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, after the invention of
telephone
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the telephone
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, increasingly
people
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 began using them to communicate
instead
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 of writing
letters
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.
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, when
internet
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the internet
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 was invented, email had been recognised as a
more
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easier method of
communication
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. They work in a convenient manner since someone is not required to be present at that exact time to respond as it is in the case of phones. So, these modern
communication
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 ways
has
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 made our life easy in one sense.
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, nothing can surpass the
way
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people
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 could feel holding a letter in their hands.
People
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 used to write
letters
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 not only for just
communication
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purpose
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 but
also
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 for expressing their emotions and love.
Letters
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 are assumed as
token
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 of love even in
this
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 modern world. The reader can feel the touch of their loved
one’s
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one
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 in
this
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 little piece of paper.
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,
Letters
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 are considered a special means of
communication
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.
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,
People
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 sometimes read over and over the same letter out of their love and emotions attached to
this
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 piece of paper.
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,
solidiers
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soldiers
 protecting the border of the country may not have access to
convenient
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 methods of
communication
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,
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 and regularly opt for the
tradional
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traditional
way
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 to express their care for
loved-ones
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loved ones
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. To sum up, no matter how much advanced the world becomes,
letters
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 will be always a very special
way
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 to express feelings.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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