Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other words, it is an international problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today’s modern world, we are constantly encountered with the issue of environmental complication which
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becoming the biggest threat to humanity. power have started spending billions of dollars on protective and rehabilitative measures. The problem has grown at a startling pace that it is no more a regional or personal issue. I firmly believe that
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massive problem can only be handled if all individuals contribute.
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, all ministry should take steps at the national
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join hands at an international
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. Some people think that the environmental complication
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not an easy task for
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to deal with, but in fact, we can actually take up some good habits which could prove useful in dealing with
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, we can always bring along recycle backpack with us so that we can cut down the usage of
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suitcase. It can be clearly seen that human being can actually contribute to helping reduce environmental issues as fewer plastic bags being used means that less air pollution which is caused by the burning of plastic handbag in the rubbish dump sites.
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a fact that individual action combined with governmental action can do a lot more to prevent climate change than if individual civilian were not involved. In a world of six billion people, if everyone stopped the emission of wastes by purifying from factories directly into the air and watercourses . As a consequence, less air pollution and water pollution guarantee the good health of
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will be healthier and they can now live in a pollution-free country. Summing up, environmental complication should be tackled immediately with the cooperation of human being and authority. Individual
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cannot sit back and say it is someone else’s responsibility to protect the environment; we must all play our part – individual
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collective action
  • climate change
  • rising sea levels
  • extreme weather events
  • biodiversity loss
  • ecosystems
  • Convention on Biological Diversity
  • significant improvements
  • sovereignty
  • environmental policies
  • international collaboration
  • environmental degradation
  • shared responsibility
  • technological advances
  • innovative solutions
  • international cooperation
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