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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about the problem?

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cell
 phone and residential
phones
 on average by US consumer during 2001 until 2010. Overall, it can be seen that
cell
phones
 increased dramatically but residential
phones
 decrease slightly over the whole period.
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Referring
 to the line graph, in 2001 approximately 200
dollars
 were expended
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cell
 phone,
wheraes
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whereas
 the residential
phones
 service were sold at about 3.5 times that of a comparable mode of expenditure. In the
folllowing
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following
 years, the figure
of
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cell
 phone rose to around 300
dollars
 and from
then
, the trend was generally upwards until at 2006. In
this
 period, both figures were
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suspended
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 equally at 500
dollars
.
Then
,
cell
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phones
 trend rose until it
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 a pinnacle at approximately 750
dollars
 in 2010.
On the other hand
, the figure
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 residential
phones
 falls to the lowest point at 400
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 the end of
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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