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Some people prefer one-on -one lesson, while others prefer groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are different perspectives in today’s society related to attending
classes
. Which out of the two – face-to-face lesson or group
classes
 – is the best approach?
Although
 some
students
 would like to seek individual
attention
, because of the generation of more ideas and inspiration from others, I find the latter approach being best. A school of thought insists that one-to-one
classes
 will result in more personal
attention
. According to them, there would be less distraction from the other
students
 and full
attention
 is given to a single
student
, thereby, not only teacher can easily find the weakness and strength of the
students
 and
also
 a
student
 can get more clarity in terms of understanding the concept.
Additionally
, a teacher can give feedback in a proper way.
For instance
, my friend scored 90% in his 10th standard after joined an individual class. Contrarily, there will be a plethora of ideas related to the problems. Every
student
 has their own ability to think, so there would be multiple solutions to the single problem in group
classes
, whereas, in individual
classes
, a
student
 is limited with a maximum of one or two solutions.
Consequently
, a
student
 can select the best approach to resolve the problem and can score better grades.
Besides
 multiple solutions to a single problem,
students
 can get inspiration from others. By having real-life examples of their co-mates, who are brilliant in studies, other
students
 can get motivation too, to do hard work to achieve the same. A study revealed that an average
student
's grade increased in the
last
 two years because of other
students
' inspiration. To conclude, admittedly, personal
attention
 to a
student
 will help to achieve more grades;
however
, for better inducement and guidance, I favour group tuitions.
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