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Some people say that supermarkets and manufacturers have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on products they sell. Others believe that it is the consumer’s responsibility to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging.

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In today's world, there is a huge debate that it's the responsibility of supermarkets and manufacturers to reduce the amount of packaging on
products
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, others believe that it is the consumer's duty to avoid buying those
products
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. I think it's the duty of both parties consumers as well as the companies to avoid buying and manufacturing
products
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 with lots of packaging. In my point of view, most companies
use
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plastic
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 as the primary source for covering their
products
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 because it is more convenient and long-lasting. Due to
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, the amount of
plastic
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 is increasing at a very alarming rate. Whenever people buy
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 stuff they eventually throw all the packing materials, which in turn causes environmental pollution. Because
plastic
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 is very hard to recycle.
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, if the industry uses a more biodegradable substance for packing their
products
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,
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 it will be good for the environment as well as for society. Apart from
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, I believe that it's the responsibility of the consumer's not to buy
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 which
use
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 a lot of
plastic
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, people should buy stuff
that is
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 easily recycled. Nowadays, supermarkets have started keeping paper bags to carry
things
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. Yet, people select
plastic
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 over those because they are easy to carry. But, if every individual decides that they will only
use
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 the
products
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 with less polluting packing materials,
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 the environment will be very clean and healthy. In conclusion, I think it is everyone's duty to avoid buying
things
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 that
use
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 a lot of unsafe packing materials.
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, encourage other's to buy
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 that are less harmful to our neighbourhood.
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 to
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, the government should take some actions to limit the
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 of packaging companies
use
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 for their
products
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