Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Spare

time

of

youths

is one of the most important concerns of parents. A group of people claim that

teenagers

have to work as a

voluntear

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volunteer

, and these free tasks have a lot of benefit for

socity

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society

and

youths

. I totally agree with their

opinin

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opinion

and in

this

essay

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I will bring some reason. Free

time

of

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teenagers

is a global

parntal

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parental

concern. In fact, effective usage of spare

time

in

youths

is very important. Because some of them use

this

valuable

time

for

usfule

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useful

activities, while a group of them waste it. Due to

this

condition, somebody plan to use

youths

power in their society.

As a result

of

this

program,

teenagers

start to contact with real life and get a lot of

experinces

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experiences

experience

. At the same

time

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the

community

can get

benfits

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benefits

from them, too.

This

win-win trade might improve social conditions in two different way.

First

by

community

tasks which were done free of charge.

Then

by training

teenagers

for voluntary social activities. To sum up, using

teenagers

spare

time

in different effective voluntary activities, have obvious benefits for their

community

as well as themselves. In my opinion,

governers

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have to

schaduled

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scheduled

schedule

plans for using

youths

spare times in

community

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.