The charts show the proportion of holidaymakers of one region staying in different types of accommodation in three different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the proportion of holidaymakers of one region staying in different types of accommodation in three different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare four different places of
accomodation
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accommodation
where
travelers
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travellers
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from one area stayed in the years 1965, 1985 and 2005.
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, the majority of holidaymakers preferred staying with friends or relatives or living in hotels to spending
night
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time in camps or caravans. It is
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noticeable that every option out of four had a specific trend over the period shown. In 1965, staying with friends or relatives accounted for the highest proportion and 55% of all
travelers
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chose
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option but the percentage fell to 35% and 30% in 1985 and 2005, respectively.
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, only 16% of holidaymakers preferred living in hotels to other choices in 1965 and the
figure
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group increased to 37% and reached a peak of 38% to become the most popular choice in the
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four decades mentioned. Unlike the above two options, the
figure
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for camping and caravans changed inversely during the 40-year period. The
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for camping grew by 3% in the first twenty years but declined twofold in the final period
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the
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for caravan parks dropped by 4% and
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doubled in 2005.
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