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Some people spend a lot of money for their wedding ceremonies. However, others feel like it is unnecessary to spend a lot. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.

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Luxurious and expensive wedding
ceremonies
 are becoming increasingly popular among certain demographics of
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society. Some youths tend to spend a lot
for
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 their wedding, whereas others believe it is completely preposterous.
This
 essay will discuss why expensive and fabulous weddings have become popular among some
people
 but why others believe it is completely preposterous. Most
people
 tend to hold
an expensive wedding
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an expensive wedding ceremony
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ceremonies
. They believe that as the wedding is done just one time in entire life, it should be implemented very
fabulous
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 so as to everyone consider it as a memorable event.
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 that most communities and tribes in middle east countries spend too much
money
for
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 their wedding
ceremonies
 and lots of
people
 participate, in some tribes it is
tradition
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 that to hold the ceremony for one week period prepare a lot of food every day for the guests. Traditional communities, often among middle east tribes tend to spend a lot
for
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the
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weddings because they consider it as a holy event. But not everyone either believes in the expensive and fabulous wedding or afford to pay
such
 huge monies for the
ceremonies
.
This
 usually seen in the modern west communities
whom
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 hold a very simple wedding ceremony with just a few close friends as a guest.
For instance
, in
Europe
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 most wedding
ceremonies
 are limited to a small gathering
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 the church. They believe holding a simple and inexpensive wedding can help youths to save
money
 for their essential living needs
such
 as renting a house, buying furniture, car etc. While most western families prefer
a
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simple and economical wedding
ceremonies
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ceremony
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, the eastern ones tend to spend huge for their wedding.
This
 essay discussed why some
people
 like expensive
ceremonies
, but why others think indeed it is
waste
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 of
money
. In my opinion, simple and cheap
ceremonies
 are far
more
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better than fabulous and expensive ones, unless for those very rich and wealthy
people
 who have huge
money
 and even don’t know how to spend their
money
.
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