Your friend invited you to his party but your are unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain why you can’t come 2. Give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner 3. Suggest another time to meet

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I won’t be able to attend your party, as I have a lot on my plate right now. Just recently I had written to you regarding my promotion with all the benefits I would receive after the event due to which I have been struggling with the new position which comes with greater responsibility of managing and getting work done with time and quality. Before as an assistant ,manager I had fewer

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just convincing the clients and getting the documents verified but as a senior ,manager things have changed. I have to read all the documents and verify them according to the client's interests and

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sign them. I received your letter a month ago and wanted to write to you but was a bit dicey if I would make it to the party. As I mentioned about all my duties which I have to do every day even after my office hours as well as on weekends got me no time to revert. I have a personal leave

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month and if you are free we could catch up

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any day you feel fit. Hope to see you soon. Lots of love, Vaidehi.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

209 words

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Your friend invited you to his party but your are unable to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Explain why you can’t come 2. Give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner 3. Suggest another time to meet

The Greeting

Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents. What are the reasons for this? What problems can this cause?

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantaged of tourism in the modern world?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Young people today know more about international pop and film stars than they do about famous people in their own country's history. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people's interest in famous people from their country's history?

Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for best employee of the year award. Who is this person Why did you choose him? What is the characteristic of a good employee?