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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials (e.g. paper, glass, and cans). What are the reasons and solutions?

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In
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 neoteric era, most people want to learn different types of
language
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 skills and they face ample difficulties during
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 learning process. The following paragraph would elucidate possible reasons behind their hard time during
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 describe a possible solution for
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 problem.
Firstly
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 , today’s generation wants to settle abroad which leads to increase their curiosity about international
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 ,in their initial stage of learning , people do not understand another
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 because they are familiar with only their native
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 , when individuals try to learn another
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 ,
first
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 they compare a new
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 with their mother
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 and
then
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 they able to proceed
further
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 so
this
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 process becomes more complicated for students.
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, another huge problem is lack of practice because learners do not get a chance to speak with foreigners
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 they unable to do a practice with new
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. In order to solve
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 serious issue , some measures can be taken .
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 and foremost , masses can correlate the alphabets of other
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 with their
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language
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 due to
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 they will able to understand a new
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 in their own speech.
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 , students can use new words in their real life and they can practice with their family members,
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,
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 step will help them to become more familiar with a foreign
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. To recapitulate , fewer chances of practical method of
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 bring more hurdle for learners and they concentrate only on passive learning processes. People can overcome these issues by using of role-play method of learning.
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