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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter with regard to rent my one-bedroom
apartment
to your educational institute students .My name is Hardeep Singh and my
apartment
is located
next
to your college at the southwest corner of the 455 number building. It is on the 12th floor and the room number is 15 due to its height people can enjoy a nice view from the top. A tenant will get extraordinary facilities in
this
room like a luxury kitchen as well as a huge sitting area and 1 underground car parking spot.
Secondly
, the reason behind
this
decision is that I want some extra income to pay credit card bills
therefore
I will rent
this
room.
Moreover
, at
this
moment, am living alone in my house so it will be playing
such
a part and parcel role to get rid of my loneliness. A basic requirement for rented
this
home is , It will available only for a male person because it will be easy for me to adjust to a male learner.
In addition
, a student will not allow to smoke or drink in the
apartment
due to safety reasons. I will be very thankful to you if you will find a responsible person for my
apartment
. Yours faithfully Hardeep Singh
Submitted by hardeeppandher6 on

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