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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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letter with regard to rent my one-bedroom
apartment
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to your educational institute students .My name is Hardeep Singh and my
apartment
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is located
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to your college at the southwest corner of the 455 number building. It is on the 12th floor and the room number is 15 due to its height people can enjoy a nice view from the top. A tenant will get extraordinary facilities in
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room like a luxury kitchen as well as a huge sitting area and 1 underground car parking spot.
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, the reason behind
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decision is that I want some extra income to pay credit card bills
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I will rent
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room.
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, at
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moment, am living alone in my house so it will be playing
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a part and parcel role to get rid of my loneliness. A basic requirement for rented
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home is , It will available only for a male person because it will be easy for me to adjust to a male learner.
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, a student will not allow to smoke or drink in the
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due to safety reasons. I will be very thankful to you if you will find a responsible person for my
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. Yours faithfully Hardeep Singh
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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