In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Getting a good

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is very tough nowadays,and

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real time

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experience is vital to get

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desired

job

than

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textbook

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text book

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knowledge

.It

is disagreed

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that

thoretical

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theoretical

knowledge

can be ignored while getting a

job

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this

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am going to explain how important having a

qualification

is, in order to get

many

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kind

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jobs

Firstly

,there are thousands of students who are completing their graduation every year and coming out of

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colleges in search of

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jobs

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but failing to get

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employment according to their

qualification

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, many employers will prefer

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prior experience which is nothing but practical

sills

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However

,there are

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abundance

abundence

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jobs

which

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are based on the

associates

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qualifications.

For example

,to obtain any desired government service,candidates should have the right degrees.

Secondly

,not only government sector

jobs

but many private companies

also

require a

sutiable

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suitable

qualification

.Adding to

this

, an internship will

also

be offered by many organisations in which students who have

right

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qualification

and joined the company without practical

knowledge

can be trained with

little

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stipend so that they will get the exposure of

real time

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knowledge

that the organisation is looking for.For an instance,an IT company

last

year recruited 15000 students through walk-ins and

trian

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train

them on several skills and deploy them

further

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believe

this

process will

further

continue to have the right candidates selected in the interviews. To conclude

this

,having

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practical experience is important in

acquring

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acquiring

well paid

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job

.Having said that,it is more important to have the formal

qualification

to get a

job

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