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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #teenagers #community #work #time #benefit
The public
argue
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 about
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 and usefulness of the free of charge
work
 in extra time both for the youth, being involved
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 the process and the society. In my opinion, teenagers can become more aware of their own life, doing some community duties, that, in the end, can help to raise up people, who are more sympathetic and responsible for other members of the society.
For example
, the young people, who make some household in nursery houses or
work
 in uncommercial organizations to help the homeless with food and shelter begin to be conscious of difficulties of life and,
therefore
, become self-contained and determined persons quicker, compared to those, who don’t encounter with problem situations and
unsocialaized
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unsocialized
socialized
 groups.
Besides
 it, being incorporated in the community
work
 without any payment, teenagers, living in marginal blocks and districts, can be so busy and
captchered
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captured
 by these initiatives, that might be prevented from becoming
murderes
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murderers
,
burgleres
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burglaries
burglars
, or other types of guilt. At the same time, unpaid
work
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the
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selfishless
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selfishness
 and not-
monettory
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monetary
 interest in
the
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public
work
. So to conclude, as
for
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 me, the unpaid
work
 among teenagers for the
favor
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 of society can bring up the
healty
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healthy
-minded future generations, who fully understand the seriousness of the problems of lower groups and classes. Actually,
this
 can help to make inclusive communities.
Moreover
, we should rethink
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our
frightness
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brightness
rightness
 about involving the youth in some common strategies, which are started by city authorities
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • required
  • unpaid
  • community work
  • benefit
  • teenagers
  • life skills
  • volunteering
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • socially aware
  • responsible
  • interact
  • diverse backgrounds
  • cultural understanding
  • tolerance
  • work experience
  • essential skills
  • employment
  • interests
  • passions
  • career development
  • contribute
  • betterment
  • development
  • local community
  • mental well-being
  • stress
  • self-esteem
  • burden
  • academic
  • personal lives
  • time management
  • support
  • balance
  • participate
  • encouraged
  • numerous benefits
  • individuals
  • conclusion
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