Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime is to gibe longer prison sentences. others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both the views and provide your opinion.

The

crime

rate

across the world is rising at an alarming

rate

because of many reasons. While some people

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longer prison times are going to reduce the

crime

rate

, others,

however

, think that there are other ways in the form of rehabilitation and educating criminals is the best

option

. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and provide my opinion on why lengthier jail times is the best suitable

option

to get rid of crimes. A group of people, including

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think, locking up the criminals for extended durations gives better results. As the number of offenders

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away from society due to locked behind the bars, communities would prosper without

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rate

and feel safe. Norway as a country,

for instance

, average punishment duration is 14 years, which really helps the public to be safe and secure.

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lengthier imprisonments brings the deterrence to commit the

next

one. The prolonged punishments will bring

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among prisoners in the long run. On contrary, others think that the programmes like rehabilitation and providing education after punishments would help in reducing the offence. The majority of illegal activities are due to the lack of financial freedom,

hence

, helping the prisoners with financial support will help to stop the offensive works down the line. The Indian

governments

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thought-provoking idea,

for example

, to encourage pick-pocketers with small scale business loans have reduced

crime

to some extent.

Therefore

,

this

will have an impact on criminals to rethink before committing a new

crime

. In my view, I think extended jail times would be the best

option

to eradicate crimes. The criminal minds are so polluted that even though they have been rehabilitated, they might not be in a position to change

thier

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their

minds and settle in society to not

to

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commit illegal activities. A drug smuggler,

for instance

, can earn lakhs of rupees for a single transaction, which would not be the case with

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small scale business. In conclusion,

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rate

is

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concern across the world. While some people think extended periods of imprisonment will decrease the

crime

rate

, others, on contrary, believes alternative ways like enabling the illegal activists with rehabilitation and education can be approached to bring it down. In my opinion, lock-up for longer periods is the best

option

to save society.