Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a school career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your option.

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Nowadays, it is argued which is one is the right way to succeed, some people opine that university degrees are the best option to make a career.
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, others believe that after school, the student should focus on their job.
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assignment indeed to discusses both perspectives and I shall analyze my own views. The predominant reason
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a university study is that many big companies are required
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employees.
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, Microsoft, Apple and other social media company
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employees who did
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engineering degree.
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, the government sector
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examination for the people who interested in the government job. Many people are willing to take
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, they have some conditions
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as age, qualification, and other things. If a candidate does not take
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according to their need
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he/she does not eligible to take
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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