Write about the following topic. The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

This
new generation is increasingly dependent on
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in various aspects and there
is
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both negative and positive sides to its usage.
One
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hand
internet
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plays
a
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important role and we have started depending on it in a wide range for our daily tasks.
Internet
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has so much
of
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information that it plays a role
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whenever
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when ever
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whenever
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we are in need of something.
For example
, Students get their help for their
currivulam
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curriculum
curricular
activities and case studies.Office goers use them for documents and technical processes to
utlize
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utilize
for their ongoing project.
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Housewives
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House wives
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or people cooking at home use them for their daily cookery
reciepes
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recipes
.Even
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children
children's
childrens
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children
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have started using broadband enjoying watching their favourite rhymes or cartoons.
Additionally
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this
even has been helping for video calls and messaging with advanced technologies of
high speed
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internet
to talk to them face to face with their
closed
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ones who are far away from them.With recent application developments on navigation and location sharing these have highly helped people to find and move even if they are new to any location.
On the other
hand
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they do have some drawbacks.Like they say too much of something is dangerous.
Internet
is not limited to certain topics alone ,
its
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it's
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an ocean having many other topics and details like pornography ,
lottary
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lottery
, illegal items like drugs , trafficking and weapons.
These information
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when they fall
on
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the wrong hands is completely dangerous to
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oneself
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one self
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oneself
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and to
the
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society.
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,
internet
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the internet
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not only gives details about any drug but
also
about
information
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the information
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on how to get the ingredients , method of
preperation
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preparation
and even the place where it is sold.
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is threatening for
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society. In conclusion, though
internet
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has
couple
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of cons still their advantages outweigh them and with
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government
governement
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the governement
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trying to take possible security measures to proactively monitor
the
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internet
usage
this
is a boon to
this
generation to learn and share
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to
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everyone.
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