Essay Question 1. Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
Price
is a
one of Change the article
apply
considerations
when Correct article usage
the considerations
people
buying some goods, such
as cell phones
or choosing services like medical treatment. Other think that it is important to include price
as a main factor in retail and service transaction, yet in my opinion, people
are no longer sensitive in price
issue. They will think and consider other factors that influence thier
consumption behaviours. The factors will be conveyed in the below paragraphs.
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their
Firstly
, technology has become a part of our daily life and people
use technology to support their jobs. They will compare gadgets' specification and functions as their main considerations. For some people
, they are willing splurge
more money in order to get cell Fix the infinitive
to splurge
phones
which can support their needs. For example
, social media darlings and content creators will choose cell phones
with best
quality Change the article
the best
in
cameras to produce clear still photos and videos. Others Change preposition
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such
as graphic designers for
instance, Add the comma(s)
,for
are prefer
to invest in tablets than mobile Change the verb form
prefer
phones
. So that, they can get products that suit with
their objectives.
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Secondly
, users also
believe in reputation when choosing services or purchasing products. The trend of writing honest reviews on the Internet also
changes people
's orientation on products. It is easier for them to select amongst many options provided. For instance
, when they type brands on search engines, the mechine
learning will crawl the most read review with the highest scores and suggest the best services they can choose. If they find Correct your spelling
machine
suggestion
that matches with their preferences, Add an article
the suggestion
a suggestion
price
will be less major.
In conclusion, Add an article
the price
people
are willing to spend more money if the technology or service are
suitable Change the verb form
is
with
their needs and preferences, so they will not consider Change preposition
for
price
as a big issue.Submitted by hanizachri on
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