Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid job and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. What extent do you agree?

Nowadays, the amount of

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paid in

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with low payment prospects is extremely far from the one of the

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. Some

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argue that

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phenomenon should be managed and that the

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gap between both should be filled.

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essay will show my view of

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matter and will provide both extents. Balancing the monetary' gap between high and low paid

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is needed in society.

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, some

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are simply over-paid. A clear example of

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is the salary of the congress members. Their workload is not heavy and they are being paid only to assist to the congress meetings.

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, in Colombia, senators earn 30 times more

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than nurses. If we compare their contributions and assistance towards

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society,

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monetary remuneration is not fair at all.

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, many professional careers are not paid as they should be. Programming or Engineering students, who have to study effortlessly and take 7 years before finishing their studies, are being hired to earn the lowest payment rates.

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, some

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earning high amounts of

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deserve it, as they do an exceptional job. It is completely difficult to undertake and fulfil

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certain

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. They require a lot of experience, knowledge and effort.

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, the probability of someone becoming an astronaut is one in a million

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.

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, the high amount of

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paid is worthy because they take a unique opportunity where they can even

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their lives.

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, some job professions are simply too complex to take. Professionals

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as hearth surgeons completely deserve to be well paid, as they can save

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' lives and they paid

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amount of

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specializing in

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field. To conclude, from my perspective there are some

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that are simply over-paid and others that deserve to have higher economic prospects. In

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case, it should

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to equilibrate the

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differences between both.

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, it is completely right for some specific areas of work to remain as the highest paid

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.