Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this has bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of changes in our lifestyles. With technology invading and conquering our life we have become more used to

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fast-paced life and have welcomed some major variations in the type of

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we intake. Fast

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has become part and parcel of our daily lives. I agree that humans depending more and more on

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has some adverse effects on their health and are more prone to have negative effects

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their routine.

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, we see that in

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fast-paced work we are depending on fast

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to provide for our daily needs of

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supply. They are easily accessible and ready to eat within few minutes.

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is impacting our health tremendously causing severe health issues including obesity and heart problems. Fast

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taste better and addict able due to several ingredients being used while making them.

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, we are compelled to buy these type of

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rich in carbohydrates and fat though we are aware of the consequences.

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industry is causing severe hazards for

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as well. For

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to stay longer the junk industry packages them in plastics

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dangerous to the atmosphere which

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well known to everyone. It spoils the soil, clogs the drains and is causing harmful effects on marine life when it reaches

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. Eating habits in a family have changed drastically. Gone are the days when

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used to sit together and have elaborate and healthy meals.

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everyone just wants to munch whatever is available and get going with their work as soon as possible.

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brings in negative consequences where individuals in a family are not able to bond with each other. To conclude Fast

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, have

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impact on our lives and environment and I think its high time that we expel them from our lives.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Proliferation
Obesity
Diabetes
Caloric intake
Addictive
Nutritional deficit
Culinary traditions
Healthcare expenditure
Immediate gratification
Lifestyle diseases
Homogenization
Processed foods

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Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this has bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However some say that young people can also take the lead of organisations or companies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Ordinary people copy famous people whome they see on TV and magazines. Do you think this is a positive development?

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What can be done to solve this problem?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?