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Some claim that studying abroad has great benefits for a student’s home country. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#student’s #home #country
Continueing
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 education
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overseas is a chalangbale condition. A group of people believe in
this
 opinion, because of improving their county.
Although
 I agree with
this
 belief, a few disadvantages of it will be explained in
this
 essay. The
first
 negative aspect of Sending
Students
 Abroad is referred to economic issues of those
countries
. In fact, developing
countries
 are the main home
countries
 of
students
 who are studied in Europe and other developed
countries
.
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this
situation
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 a lot of money has been spent
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 these
students
 which may increase financial problems for other people of their
countries
. The other side effect of studying overseas is related to
permanent
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 immigration of
students
 to the host country, due to lack of opportunities in their
countries
. Diminish proportion of these
students
 who are categorised as
talent
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 in their
countries
 with ordinary people, may decrease population intelligence quality (I.Q.),
therefor
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 the development of their
countries
 might be postponed.
In contrast
 to disadvantages, sending student for studying in foreign
countries
, have crucial positive results. The most important aspect of
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advantags
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advantage
advantages
 is related to the improvement of education in the
countries
 of
students
. A small number of those scholars may return to their homes, though they have a strong capacity to influence
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their compatriots and develop their territories. These
students
also
 play as a bridge between the country of studying and the state of their origin which facilitate
trade
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 of sciences, knowledge and merchandises.
As a result
 of these trades, the economy of the community has been improved
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consequently
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 the gap between developed and developing
countries
 will be decreased. In conclusion, sending scholars to developed
countries
 for continuing studying, has many positive results on home’s country.
Although
 primary investments for these scholars are high, these
students
 can increase education’s quality and Per capita income of their territories.
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