It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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The beginning of

children

life

is the best time for teaching them good and bad

things

However

punishment

may have necessary to teaching them those

things

.I agree with that opinion and

parents

can give

punishment

such

as they will not give a meal to their

children

whereas

teacher

can stand up to the student who done a bad thing.

Children

should learn about the difference between right and wrong

although

punishment

is necessary for teaching them those

things

.A good reason is,

this

will help them to avoid wrong

things

.Unless they do not know about those

things

in their early

life

,they may not learn in the future as well.So,

instead

of giving lessons about right and wrong in their later

life

,it will helpful for them if they learn those manners

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the starting of their

life

For instance

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adult people may react if anybody tries to teach them good lessons but

children

will take it easy and they will know that

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that was a bad thing.Another reason is,they remember those

things

that they learn at an early age.

In addition

punishment

often helps a

child

to remember good and bad

things

.So,early age is the best time for teaching good behaviour,

although

punishment

is needed. There are many kinds of

punishment

available which

parents

and

teacher

can give to a

child

Parents

can take action

such

as they may not supply food when a

child

made any mistake.

As a result

,the

children

will not do the same thing in future.

For example

,when a

child

will not get something to eat,

then

be will able to know that he has done a bad job and he may not do the same thing in the future as well.

However

, a

teacher

can teach discipline by giving them physical

punishment

such

as they may stand up to the student in the class for a certain period.Even though

children

will feel ashamed,they will learn a great lesson.So,those sort of

punishment

teacher

can give their students. In conclusion,for teaching good behaviour,

parents

and

teacher

can take other action which not

affect

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affects

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child

physically.

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