You are living in a university residence and you have a problem with the high level of noise from new campus restaurant which is open late at night. write a letter to governor of university.
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to bring to your notice the extreme level of disturbance caused by new
restaurant opened locally.
Let me explain Correct article usage
a new
Change preposition
to you
you
the situation, the new eatery is located beside the student house. It has Correct pronoun usage
apply
musical
theme Correct article usage
a musical
therefore
, they play music till late night
. They have live concerts as well more Change preposition
at night
oftenly
due to which they Correct your spelling
often
turns
the volume high.
As of Change the verb form
turn
exagerated
Correct your spelling
exaggerated
noise
not only me but other students as well are not able to Add a comma
,noise
contentrate
on their studies and are getting hard time Correct your spelling
concentrate
to complete
their assignments. Change the verb form
completing
In addition
to this
, last
week I had my
test for which I did not get Change the word
a
chance
to study Correct article usage
a chance
Therefore
, I scored lower
grade. Final term exams are starting from Correct article usage
a lower
next
week and I am afraid that if this
goes like same It might affect my academic report.
Lastly
, My suggestion would be to either make this
restaurant noise free
after 10pm or change the operating hours Add a hyphen
noise-free
accordingly
.
I thank you for my
consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Correct pronoun usage
your
kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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