You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

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Dear Sir, I have been accepted to join the Master of

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semester at your college. I received an invitation to attend an interview on the 27th of April, which is overwhelming.

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, I would like to inform you of my prior appointment on the same day. The timing

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an important meeting that I have at my workplace, which starts at 8 AM until mid-afternoon. Understanding how important it is for me to meet you to finalise my admission and hoping that you would allow me to alter the timing to any date and time except the

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. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience and humbly request you to kindly reschedule my interview, for which I will be very thankful.

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, kindly let me know if I need to take any

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as part of the interview process and how long the session might continue. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Alex

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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