If a product is good and meet customer needs,then people will buy it. So advertising it is unneccessary. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#product #customer #people #unneccessary

In the modern world, We will find

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plenty

of products for a need. Indeed, if anyone

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product

usefull

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useful

or satisfy his or her needs

then

they will buy that

product

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promotion of the

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shows its qualities but it

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create

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confusion in

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selection and

over expectation

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with the

product

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this

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I will discuss why I feel

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product

not required.

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industry not only

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over expectation in the customers but

also

confuse them

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selection. Promotion of the

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generate

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false dreams and hopes in customers.

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shows, it will fair the

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scene

screen

in just

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seven

days. So people buy

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expectation

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that they will be fair after applying

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racism

that black girl

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not beautiful and fairness is the scale of beauty. Along with

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as we can see so many

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advertisements

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, Media

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industry

spending so much money to fool their customers as most of the products are not actually meant to work, they are only for playing customer’s emotions.

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shampoo

, in the

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they

shows

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after applying

this

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shampoo

a bald man get the hair in just fifteen days.

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not

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possible

if he applied it till fifteen years

also

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genetics and the

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its not only impact

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emotions but

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name is

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on the stack .

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customer never buy any

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from that brand. On

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customer

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a customer

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buy

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product

after finding it

usefull

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useful

he will be

more happy

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. In conclusion,

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the Advertisiment

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product

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should be controlled. As it is responsible for lots of false information.

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