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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

#immigration #impact #society #consequences
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As we all know
immigration
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 is an increasingly common occurrence and can be seen in most
countries
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, especially in
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 world
countries
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. In
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 I am going to explicate the reasons that lead
people
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 to immigrate from their native
countries
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 to other
countries
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, and all the consequences that
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 action has.
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 of all, I think everybody knows the most popular reason why
people
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 move to another place, which is to try to find a better life, economically speaking, they think there are more opportunities in the working world because they could not find them in their country. Especially families who want to find a better future for their children,
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 to have a good education.
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Furthermore
, there are
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 where you cannot have a decent life because of political problems,
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 as Palestine, which is in
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continuous war.
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, we find the consequences that
immigration
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 leaves us with, one of the most important of which is the depiction of many
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 who had high expectations but are faced with the harsh reality that it is not as perfect as it seems.
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 one of the biggest problems is the overpopulation in these
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 due to
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 large number of
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 each year. After
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 things considered, I reckon that
immigration
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 will continue to increase in the future, and yet more and more efforts are being made to curb illegal
immigration
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,
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 I still believe that it is impossible to stop it,
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 it can be reduced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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