Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects this have on animal life and human society?

Nowadays, the world is fully turning to the industrial world,

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, every country has to have a lot of

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to improve its people's well-being.

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, everything has pros and cons or that means, even though having industrial enterprises could bring a variety of positive points, it

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brings dramatically drawbacks, ruining mostly in

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quality

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essay, I will inspect and discuss the causes of the circumstance and the effects on any living species.

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, with the regard to the causes, the worsen environmental phenomena occurs with the

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of leaking toxicity

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on purpose into

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habitats

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as lakes, rivers or oceans. The

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why I mentioned the main cause arises from

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is the cruciality of

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in the industrial field,

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, all

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use

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as a substance for cooling down

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' machines.

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, I think the main

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accounts for running businesses, mostly industrial ones. In my opinion, there are

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for the causes,

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, the industry is the largest

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for

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pollution.

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, when the adverse scenario happens, a plethora of problem will affect most things in the world whether animals or human society, the problems vary obviously.

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, there's still a common effect too. The most obvious one is kidney diseases. And, it's because every living organism relies on

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trying the best to improve the

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of it. Despite health problems, another drama one is the

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pollution, it seems very far from the

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problems at

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. But after digging into it, I found its connections,

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always vaporizes into

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the bad

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of

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brings bad

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. Living in the bad condition of

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means that you're unable to breathe freely and it's extremely annoying. To conclude, it's true that having industrial companies in the country could bring civilians many advantages, developing countries into another level.

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, in the long run, running companies without concerning the consequences are dramatically negative, people lives will be ruined whether by terrible

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condition or

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quality

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.

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, I suggest everyone preserve the environment, especially the authorities.