Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects this have on animal life and human society?

Nowadays, the world is fully turning to the industrial world,

in other words

, every country has to have a lot of

factories

to improve its people's well-being.

However

, everything has pros and cons or that means, even though having industrial enterprises could bring a variety of positive points, it

also

brings dramatically drawbacks, ruining mostly in

water

quality

.

Therefore

, in

this

essay, I will inspect and discuss the causes of the circumstance and the effects on any living species.

Firstly

, with the regard to the causes, the worsen environmental phenomena occurs with the

reason

of leaking toxicity

water

on purpose into

water

habitats

such

as lakes, rivers or oceans. The

reason

why I mentioned the main cause arises from

factories

is the cruciality of

water

in the industrial field,

for example

, all

factories

use

water

as a substance for cooling down

factories

' machines.

Therefore

, I think the main

reason

accounts for running businesses, mostly industrial ones. In my opinion, there are

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for the causes,

however

, the industry is the largest

reason

for

water

pollution.

Secondly

, when the adverse scenario happens, a plethora of problem will affect most things in the world whether animals or human society, the problems vary obviously.

However

, there's still a common effect too. The most obvious one is kidney diseases. And, it's because every living organism relies on

water

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therefore

trying the best to improve the

quality

of it. Despite health problems, another drama one is the

air

pollution, it seems very far from the

water

problems at

first

. But after digging into it, I found its connections,

water

always vaporizes into

air

therefore

the bad

quality

of

water

brings bad

air

. Living in the bad condition of

air

means that you're unable to breathe freely and it's extremely annoying. To conclude, it's true that having industrial companies in the country could bring civilians many advantages, developing countries into another level.

However

, in the long run, running companies without concerning the consequences are dramatically negative, people lives will be ruined whether by terrible

air

condition or

water

quality

.

Therefore

, I suggest everyone preserve the environment, especially the authorities.