Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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claim that various kind of
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should be shared as much as possible. Others,
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thought that the
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more value should not be shared freely.
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why necessary
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should be shared freely. On the one hand, if
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a man who wants to starts a new business,
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can learn more about business, which will be helpful for him.
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, some valuable
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society.
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bring some problem.
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minded
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for harming human
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which can create a problem for society should not be shared freely. In my opinion, the
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which is necessary for
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should be shared freely. Because
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their life. In conclusion, valuable or too important
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should not
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freely because
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can be an issue for human.
However
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,
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which is helpful for human should be shared freely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaboration
  • accelerates progress
  • innovative discoveries
  • transparency
  • open access
  • verify results
  • fraudulent
  • ethical practices
  • consumer trust
  • potential risk
  • misuse
  • sensitive information
  • genetic data
  • defense-related technologies
  • proprietary information
  • trade secrets
  • competitive edge
  • value
  • investment of time and resources
  • compensation
  • disincentivize
  • recoup costs
  • balanced approach
  • policies and agreements
  • sensitive data
  • fair compensation
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