5. Some people believe that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent times, the need to understand how to
show
care
is an issue all over the world. Nowadays, it is no longer clear for
people
how to
show
their
care
about others. There are those who believe
gifts
is
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a perfect way, while others argue that there are many other ways to
show
care
.
To begin
with, those who believe that showing
care
through
gifts
is the best way, say so for several reasons.
Firstly
, if two
people
exchanging
gift
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the gift
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for
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example,
boxing
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day it means they
are
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care
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care
about each other.
Secondly
, if someone
buy
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buys
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a gift for their mother and
their
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have no reason for it,
such
as birthday,
mothersday
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mothers day
, or boxing day.
This
guess is showes how much
thei
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they
their
the
love and
care
about their mother. Despite
this
view, there are those who state
gifts
are not
necassery
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necessary
to
show
care
.
First
of all, these
people
say in many
ocassion
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occasion
movements are mean much more than
gifts
.
For
example
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if someone helps their parents as they are old and they need daily help for living. It shows how much
this
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these
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chidren
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children
care
about their parents and it
expressd
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expressed
without
gifts
.
Moreover
, if someone
care
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cares
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about
other
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someone other
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than that person keep in
tuch
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touch
with them every day not just that time when they need help. As a
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result
resoult
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,resoult
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they
shows
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show
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their
care
abut
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about
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other
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others
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,
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apply
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since there are
listening
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tolistening
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them. In conclusion,
Nevertheless
,
gifts
are the easiest way to express
care
, sometimes movements mean much more.
Therefore
, it is in my
oppinion
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opinion
that based on my
experiense
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experience
people
can feel if you
are
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care
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care
about them with or without
gifts
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tangible symbols
  • Affection
  • Materialism
  • Cultural traditions
  • Impact
  • Relationships
  • Quality time
  • Acts of service
  • Communication
  • Shared experiences
  • Equating
  • Emotional presence
  • Physical presence
  • Material possessions
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