The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source Australia nad France in 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts give information about how
units
of electricity
were produced using different fuel sources in two countries, namely Australia and France, in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, the total amount of unites
highly soared from 1980 to 2000. Replace the word
units
In addition
, the usage of nuclear power
as an electricity
production source immensely jacked up until 2000, whereas
hydro
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hydropower
power
and natural gas almost disappeared as sources at the same time.
As can be seen in the pie charts, nuclear power
sharply rose from 15 units
to 126 and was responsible for nearly two of third
electricity
generation. However
, natural gas plummeted from 25 units
to 2 units
in 2000 and hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
slightly declined to 2 units
, before being at 5 units
in 1980.
Turning to coal and oil, both produced 25 units
in 2000. The usage of coal as a source for
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of
electricity
production remained stable. Meanwhile, oil increase
by 10 Wrong verb form
increased
units
to 25 units
over 40 years.Submitted by dietrich.silber on
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