Some people believe that parents should limit their children hours of watching tv and playing computer games, but encourage to read books. Do you agree or disagree.

It is often argued by some people that parents should discourage their

children

playing

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computer games and watching tv.

Instead

, they should encourage them reading books. I am a strong advocate of

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standpoint and shed some light on

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topic.

To begin

with, we have to understand that

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digital entertainments bring little or no value

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education. The addictive nature of these amusements does not inculcate any cognitive skills. Actually, it devastates these competencies. Oftentimes,

this

habit

cloud

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their judgment and make their rational thinking unstable.

Therefore

, the result would be a fictional personality.

For instance

, some research

reveal

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that

children

, who spend many hours in front of

computer

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screen, perform poorly at school.

On the other hand

, reading more and more books is much beneficial to the young.

This

habit is known to be

advantegeous

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advantageous

for education, as it

develop

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creativity in the youth. It

also

enhance

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appriciation

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appreciation

which is a highly acceptable personal quality. Some people believe that those who read a lot are well recognized by

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society. Studies

also

show that

children

who used to be good readers during their childhood inherit a peaceful mind and later become nature lovers.

For instance

, the founder of

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non-violence movement, late

Ghandi

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Gandhi

was a

well known

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reader. In conclusion, I radically agree that parents should restrict their

children

watching

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television

exessively

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excessively

and playing video games. Minors must be encouraged to read more.