Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home. Is this a positive or negative development?

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the advancement

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advancement

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advanced

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technology

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of technology

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nowadays,

robots

have been invented for the purpose of helping humans in both

work

and household activities. In my opinion, there are both merits and demerits of having artificial intelligence.

To begin

with, there are many advantages of having

robots

for our life.

Firstly

,

this

can reduce the

work

stress in

organaisation

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organisation

organization

and certainly many firms use

robots

lifting

havy

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heavy

weight rather than human

as a result

,

this

will decrease the human accident in firms.

Secondly

,

an automatic machines

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automatic machines

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such

as washing machine,

dish washer

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dishwasher

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and

vaccum

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vacuum

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clener

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cleaner

these kinds of automatic machine can save a lot of time

therefore

,

the

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people are able to

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time with their family and friends.

For example

, many companies have been using artificial

intellience

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intelligence

for their

every day

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routine job

instead

of

worker

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the worker

a worker

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as a result

, they can get more profit along with more productivity.

On the other hand

, negativity can not be ignored.

This

means using

robots

for household

work

and organisation task creates many demerits.

Firstly

,

this

kind of artificial intelligence might be reduced the

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manpower

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man power

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manpower

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ergo, many people will be lost their job

consequently

, the unemployment ratio will be increased and

country

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the country

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economy

also

decrease.

Secondly

, the population would be lived lazy and inactive due to technology gadgets.

For instance

, according to the survey said that more than 70% of the folks are living lazy and inactive

therefore

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,therefore

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, they get more

deseases

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diseases

. To conclude,

although

there are many advantages of using

robots

for

work

and day-to-day

work

and

this

trend can reduce the

work

stress among the employees and we should consider the negative side

also

because

this

development certainly brings more demerits to the employee and society. I think

this improvements

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this improvement

these improvements

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have both positive and negative outcomes.