Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art. do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
There is a close connection between
art
and culture.A countries history and culture is derived based on the artistic design
of the nation.If the child has the creativity and talent of designing something unique , then
he should be motivated and trained to develop the skill such
that it helps him personally and as well brings something good to the country.
To begin
with, schools these days focus on extracurricular actvities
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success and these are various other Change to a genitive case
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talents
one could poses .One such
skill is art
which few rarely possess.Not every child has the creative thinking of doing something impressive.Add an article
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if one has the skill then
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Art
is a broad topic and could include anything ranging from paper drawing, glass painting, designing buildings or even monuments.For instance
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design
their rooms with their own fantasy thoughts and make them colourfull
.They can use their dreams picturized as real which could eventually motivate them.Correct your spelling
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Many
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such
Burj Khalifa or Taj Mahal has been unique design
which someone dream'nt once and built them based on their creativity and people still get mesmurized
watching them even today.
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However
, parents want most children to focus on their general studies as they believe regular acedemics
help them towards earning more money in future.Children who are skilled in Correct your spelling
academics
such
unique talents
often fail in their usual subjects since they often find them hard to study and understand.This
eventually demotivates them when comparing with their peer students on their acedemic
capabilities and Correct your spelling
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finally
fail on all aspects.Consequently
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, therefore,
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better that parents understand their kids
skills and start focusing on those that they aspire and try to improve.Change to a genitive case
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they should Add a comma
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believe that such
skills are unique and are god gifted talents
unlike
many others.
In conclusion,let parents and teachers encourage those children who have unique Add the comma(s)
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talents
on
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in
art
so that they bring eye catching
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eye-catching
design
to the world that would become history and even landmark
to the city and nation.Correct article usage
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