Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art. do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

There is a close connection between
art
and culture.A countries history and culture is derived based on the artistic
design
of the nation.If the child has the creativity and talent of designing something unique ,
then
he should be motivated and trained to develop the skill
such
that it helps him personally and as well brings something good to the country.
To begin
with, schools these days focus on extracurricular
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activities
to bring out the talent of a kid.The main purpose is
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academics
is not the only thing for
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anyone
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success and these are various other
talents
one could poses .One
such
skill is
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which few rarely possess.Not every child has the creative thinking of doing something impressive.
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if one has the skill
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proper training with
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specialized
specialised
tools can bring immense output.
Art
is a broad topic and could include anything ranging from paper drawing, glass painting, designing buildings or even monuments.
For instance
, kids if taught
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water paintings can
design
their rooms with their own fantasy thoughts and make them
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colourful
.They can use their dreams picturized as real which could eventually motivate them.
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famous building
such
Burj Khalifa or Taj Mahal has been unique
design
which someone dream'nt once and built them based on their creativity and people still get
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mesmerized
watching them even today.
However
, parents want most children to focus on their general studies as they believe regular
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academics
help them towards earning more money in future.Children who are skilled in
such
unique
talents
often fail in their usual subjects since they often find them hard to study and understand.
This
eventually demotivates them when comparing with their peer students on their
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academic
capabilities and
finally
fail on all aspects.
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therefore
better that parents understand their
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skills and start focusing on those that they aspire and try to improve.
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they should
also
believe that
such
skills are unique and are god gifted
talents
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many others. In conclusion,let parents and teachers encourage those children who have unique
talents
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art
so that they bring
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design
to the world that would become history and even
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to the city and nation.
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