You were studying in an English speaking country and suddenly needed to go back to your home country, leaving your course incomplete. Write a letter to your teacher to - thank him -explain the reason you left without completing your course -say during your course study what did you like most about this course.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am discontinuing my master’s degree and going back to my homeland. I cannot thank you enough for all the support you have provided me during my tough time.
Let me try to explain the reason behind my decision. As you already know, my father is not doing well with his health for the last
2 years. The
Correct article usage
Last
last
Sunday, he was hospitalized due to
severe heart disease, and doctors are not hopeful about his recovery. Being an elder son, it is my prime responsibility to support my family, especially my mother, emotionally.
All in all, I have learned a lot of things from you and all other faculties during my stay. I really loved the time management subject from the previous semester, which helped me in every aspect of life.
Please let me know if any formality is to be completed before I leave the next Monday. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jacky SpearSubmitted by soglomovsarvar on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea and sticks to it, only including relevant details that support the main idea.
Coherence & Cohesion
While your overall structure is good, you could improve clarity by adding more explicit transitions between paragraphs to guide the reader through your letter more smoothly.
Task Achievement
To fully meet the task requirements, ensure you address all parts of the prompt. You've done this well, but expanding on each point with more detail or examples could enhance your response.
Task Achievement
Maintaining a suitable tone is crucial in letter writing. You've managed to strike a formal yet personal tone appropriately, which is great. For further improvement, consider varying sentence structures for a more sophisticated writing style.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite