In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

In some countries, especially in the UK, once an elderly person is aged, they usually go to live in a certain

place

where specialised

people

takes

care

of them

such

as nurses. Often

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care

centres are paid for by

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or sometimes the family have to pay for it. Personally, I defend that each family have to take

care

of their own relatives.

Firstly

, taking

care

of an old person is not the main role for politicians neither

this

place

sponsorship.

In other words

, imagine if mayors needed to save partially a city’s monthly income to pay for asylum centres.

Furthermore

, to be in

this

place

, majority of

people

are retired and

then

, they already receive some amount of money from the

government

.

Although

this

money might not be sufficient, it is not a matter for legal

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to deal with. They have other activities which certainly affects more

people

and have

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influence on a bigger group.

People

need to account

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government

or family properly due to define better their responsibilities.

Secondly

, paying for those centres is one way to show responsibility and respect for those who need

this

place

. In general, several

people

consider retirement the saddest part of life, because they feel abandoned by their families.

Consequently

, providing financial assistance is the minimal respect they can show to

this

relative.

Besides

the respectful behaviour, most of them do not need to rely on the

government

financially to provide

this

comfort. If everyone could think

this

way,

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would be able to sponsor those who are in real need.

Hence

to conclude, I strongly believe that families need to take

care

of their own as long as they are able to do so.

This

behaviour shows respect and

care

to their relatives.

Otherwise

, they should rely on

the

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government

sponsorship.