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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world's fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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Of late, limited fossil fuel is one of the most prevalent issues faced by the world as these are used for numerous purposes
such
 as powering, fueling vehicles and electricity for industries or houses. There are numerous factors responsible for the same and to eliminate
this
 trouble, various measures can be taken which I will elaborate on in the subsequent paragraphs. There is
Correct article usage
a
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plentiful reason underlying
this
 muddle and the predominant is the overuse of petroleum, power and gas for human survival. To substantiate it, using current without no motive like lightning in a day while a person has daylight in his house as there is a dire need to save electricity and using when there is need, unlimited use of petroleum though people can avoid using private transport and they can use public vehicles
thus
 a person can come forward a step to save fossil
fuels
.
As a result
, much use of fossil
fuels
 not only harm the environment but
also
 threat to human lives. As every problem has a solution hidden in the core of its heart the same applies here as well. The need of the hour is to exercise tidal, solar and wind energy.
In other words
, tidal, solar and wind power can be used as electricity and
wastage
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the wastage
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 of food, vegetables and so on can be exploited as gas for kitchen purposes.
therefore
, people can save their atmosphere as well as the need for
fuels
. Succinctly, though fossil fuel is the need of the hour yet alternative is more useful than fossil
fuels
,
however
, a few checks and balances in
this
 regard can
further
 improve the situation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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