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Youth drug abuse is a serious problem. What are the possible causes of this behavior? Do you have any suggestion to control that?

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The bar chart below demonstrates the proportion of men and women in 6 different educational establishments in 2010 (UK) In the
first
 two settings as nursery and primary
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 it is clear that there is a huge gender gap, and
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 number of female teachers (97%) prevails on
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 of male teachers (from 5-10%) in the same academic centres. The percentage gets almost
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gender
generally
 equal in secondary school (45% and 51%), and in college where
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 is exactly the same but
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 not for a long time and the situation gets the opposite at the university, where there are much more male students (75%) than female (only 36%) Overall,
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 the end we can get to the conclusion: serious educational settings (colleges, universities)are dominated by males, when at the establishments
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 as primary schools or pre-schools the percentage of female students
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 twice higher.
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