In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes and measures that should be taken?
In some nations ,
although
the percentage of serious crimes
are declining people
are more insecure than before. This
essay argue
that Change the verb form
argues
people
still have memories of their previous occurrences stored in their minds and also
easily accessible on internet
making them fresh in their hearts. The suggested measures are that more seminars Add an article
the internet
to
be conducted by security personnel and having a transparent way of dealing with Fix the infinitive
apply
crimes
through media.
Many still feel unsafe even though there is a fall in serious crimes
that is
they are afraid of past experiences re-occurring again. No one desires to go through Correct article usage
the same
same
painful situations due to Correct your spelling
some
crimes
that occurred in their life because other
may have lost their loved one's whom they can see again. Correct pronoun usage
others
Therefore
, they tend to have fear of this
cases happening again. Correct determiner usage
these
Additionally
, there are recorded videos on the internet of crimes
happenings. Victims of these situations may be stressed or depressed due to watching these videos on the internet making them feel uncomfortable of
what may happen. Change preposition
about
For example
, a
research Correct article usage
apply
of
Dursit attack victim by citizen TV in Kenya shows most of them feel unsafe.
Several measures are to be put in place Change preposition
on
that is
more seminars should be conducted by the police to give hope to people
. It is said what you feed your mind is the outcome you get, in other words
, many feed their minds with fear and if police men
can use the opportunity to give hope to them affirming them of their safety will bring a huge change. To add Correct your spelling
policemen
on
Change preposition
to
this
, there should be transparency through social media for victims to get justice. Stealing from someone makes one distracted from the course he was doing and thus
these case proceedings should be live for people
to see victims getting justice. For example
, in Kenya in 2017
elections judges had a hard to administer justice because the whole country was watching them and by Correct article usage
the 2017
this
they gave a fair judgement.
In conclusion, in spite Add a comma
,this
major
Change preposition
of major
crimes
getting decreased in some nations, people
are feeling quite unsafe compared to before. This
is because of storing of
previous Change preposition
apply
crimes
in their minds and being able to access past crime recordings on website
. Add an article
the website
However
, the possible solutions are more meetings with residents on matter security
and fair judgement via social media.Change preposition
of security
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