Robots will soon replace people in all work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is a popular opinion that soon all job will be done by technology. Now I would like to express my point of view on
this
issue. I strongly believe that, unfortunately, soon
robots
will do all our job.
Firstly
, in our
life
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we run into
robots
everywhere. When we call somewhere or go to the shop.
For example
, when we call some company,
firstly
a robot answers the phone and
then
it switches to the operator.
Also
, some shops have automatic checkouts
instead
of a cashier.
Secondly
,
robots
work faster and more properly.
On the other hand
, there are irreplaceable jobs, which need people,
for
example
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teachers or doctors.
Robots
will never be cleverer than humans and cannot replace them.
Nevertheless
, I disagree with the opposing opinion, because even teachers and doctors are replaceable.
For example
, there is
distant
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learning and a lot of apps and courses which help students in their education. I think that in the future there will be self-education and students will learn everything themselves with different applications. And
also
, there are a lot of
robots
in medicine, and in the
future
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there will be more of them. Maybe there will be some jobs left for people, but there will be very
little
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of them. In
conclusion
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I would like to say that sooner or later, but there will be time
,
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when
robots
replace humans in workplaces.
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