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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that a
language
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 is a key to communicate in the world and most
people
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 have been learning
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foreign linguistics for many purposes. While some
people
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 believe that polyglots study linguistics for travelling to or working in other
countries
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, other
people
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 believe these are not the only reason why linguist should learn a foreign
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.
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 essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter. It is clear that some
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 accept that
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 skill is important is in communication if someone will visit or find to get a
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 in abroad.
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,
people
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 can understand the foreign culture or can easily search for a
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 in other
countries
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 if they have good verbal communication.
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,
people
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 especially in ASIEN
countries
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 learn Chinese or
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 in order to look for a
job
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 and travel
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there.
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,
people
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 think that the reason for learning
English
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 is for travelling and working in a different country.
On the other hand
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, other
people
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 think that different
people
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 have different purposes for learning languages.
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,
people
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 who learn
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 is not because of travelling and it is not only to learn for their education but
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 to work as a translator in their motherland.
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, if some student wants to study in a foreign university, they must need great
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 skill to get offer and study in there. So, the point is that langue is vital and very useful in different ways. To conclude,
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 learning a foreign
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 is helpful for
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 getting a
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 or to travel in other
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, I accept that it is more beneficial in many ways in the world.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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