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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is undeniable that a
language
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 has numerous benefits and it is a key to communicate in the world and most
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 have been learning
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foreign linguistics for
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 purposes. While some
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 believe that polyglots study linguistics for travelling to or working in
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another country
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, other
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 believe these are not
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 reason why linguist should learn
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language
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 essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter. On the one hand, some
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 accept that
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 skill is important is in communication if they wish to visit or to operate in abroad.
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,
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 especially in ASIEN countries learn Chinese or English in order to look for a job and travel in Singapore.
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,
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 think that travelling and working in a different country is the principal reason
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 learning different languages.  
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 the contrary, other
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 think that different
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 have different purposes
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 learning languages.
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,
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 who learn English are not because of travelling and it is not only to learn for their education but
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 to work as a translator in their local countries.
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, if some student wants to study in
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 university, they must need to improve English skill in order to study in abroad.
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, learning a foreign langue is vital and very useful
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 ways. To conclude,
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 learning a foreign
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 getting a job or to travel in other countries, it is more beneficial in many ways in the world.
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  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
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