You work for an international company. You have seen a advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • Describe the training course you want to do • Explain what the company could do to help you • Say how the course will be useful to your job

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to inform you about an online training program which I would like to attend . There are many mutual benefits included in
this
policy that I would like to explain in the following.
This
training procedure is about safety and fire rescue management. The institution where is holding
this
training is one of the well-known centres in
this
field.
However
,
this
development only takes place once a year. As you know the cost of
this
kind of training is expensive and I can not afford it individually. I would appreciate it
,
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if our company could accept to pay half of the plan cost.
In addition
, as I mentioned
this
course is online and I do not need to have any day offs except for the practical exam’s days. After achieving
this
training certificate, I would provide a credit to our company for the upcoming tenders.
Also
, I will enhance my knowledge more in the safety subjects and will be ready for a higher position as a safety manager. I am looking forward to hearing your advice at your convenient response. My sincerely Russell
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