Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In

this

contemporary world,

people

have become possible to travel around the world as they want. A certain proportion of

people

opine that

this

change just accelerates discord between nations, but does not enhance mature understanding.

However

, I strongly disagree with

this

opinion because the major purpose that

people

travel abroad is to understand different cultures and

tourists

have less influence on travelled countries.

To begin

with, the

first

reason why I disagree with

this

opinion is that

people

intend to know different cultures, and they do not aim to

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tension or discord between nations. In fact,

tourists

often visit cultural facilities

such

as museums. In Japan, temples and shrines are the most popular tourist attractions. They tend to not only visit

such

places, but

also

they learn the culture and the history behind temples and shrines.

In addition

, another major purpose of visitors who come to Japan is the food which is

also

related to

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deeply. Another reason why I believe international tourism

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cause international friction is that foreign

tourists

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influence on

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of travelled countries. In general,

tourists

stay other countries for

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term. Research conducted by the travel agency in Japan reported that the Japanese tend to stay overseas for 3 to 10 days. It is almost impossible to affect other country's politics.

In addition

to

this

, politicians pay more attention to citizens than

people

from overseas.

Hence

, visitors will not have

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to create tension among nations. To conclude, I reiterate my complete disagreement

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this

opinion.

This

is because the biggest purpose of visitors is to understand different cultures, and they do not have

such

power that affects other country's government, since they stay very short term.