Society is becoming obsessed with material goods like fast cars, designer clothes and flashy jewellery. We have stopped caring about the important things that is why divorce rates are so high and family bonds are not as strong anymore; our value system is disintegrating. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, modernization has made

people

materialistic as they are more attracted towards luxury items

instead

of personal relations which has enlarged the differences in social relations and resulted

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disharmony of society. I completely agree with

this

statement and will discuss why in

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essay.

Primary

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reason

of

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loosening

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of family bonds is

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extensive

expensive

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use of social media. Individuals, these days, spend most of their time on social apps

such

as Facebook, Instagram and Whatsapp where they make fake profiles for impressing others; because of

this

,

people

try to

nteract

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interact

with the strangers having attractive portfolios and ignore their own real friends and family members.

This

is the main reason

of

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divorces as the couples get allured towards

people

who pretend to be good online but are something else in

actual

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.

Also

, everyone wants to capture

attention

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of others on social platforms and in order to achieve

this

objective, individuals like flaunting their goods

such

as cars, clothes, jewellery, shoes and mobile phones so as to receive recognition from their peers. Greed for money is the secondary reason

of

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people

becoming selfish and apathetic. In

this

era, everybody wants to become rich and for

this

purpose, they choose to move away from their homes to metro cities for earning handsome amount.

Consequently

, they not only ignore their family members but

also

get

detatched

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detached

form

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their traditional and cultural values which

creates

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a considerable gap among personal relationships. To conclude,

fake

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the fake

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image on social platforms, show off of personal belongings and craving

of

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wealth has made community members more attracted towards things and has resulted

into

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weak family bonds and degradation of

society

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values.